Talk:The Grey Lotus Clan

From Unofficial Handbook of the Virtue Universe

Feature Article Nomination Approved - Review

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Pros: This page is decently written and does a good job of covering the history of the group, it also does a good job of breaking the content out into logical sections to make it easy to scan through. | Cons: The OOC info and how to apply seems to be relegated to the bottom of the page. It might be better served to move this content to the top above the history items. The page could also use more visual elements, like pictures and screenshots to break up the text on the page. Otherwise I see no reason this page can't be featured. (06/27/2011)