Talk:Pit Dragon
From Unofficial Handbook of the Virtue Universe
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- Mostly complete but it is still incomplete. I have to say, however, the page has an excellent hook with the headline image and in-game screenshot of the character followed by an introductory paragraph and customized information blurb. After that, however, the page degenerates into a monotonous wall of text with no variety. I like the direction he took with the page's color scheme but it is mis-used, overusing that vibrant red completely. (Review 04/20/2011)